Copy edit target-instance.md (#1225)

Co-authored-by: Amy Reeve <[email protected]>

Author: amanda-butler-unity

mppm/player-tags/target-instance.md

@@ -4,20 +4,20 @@ title: Use Player Tags to run a player as a server, client, or host
 description: This example shows how you can use Netcode for GameObjects to run a Player as a server, client, or host in Multiplayer Play Mode.
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-This example explains how to target **Player Tags** in your game scripts with `CurrentPlayer.ReadOnlyTags()`. You can place these scripts where you want, but you must attach the scripts to a [NetworkObject](https://docs-multiplayer.unity3d.com/netcode/current/basics/networkobject/)(such as the **Player**).
+This example explains how to target **Player Tags** in your game scripts with `CurrentPlayer.ReadOnlyTags()`. You can place these scripts where you want, but you must attach the scripts to a [NetworkObject](https://docs-multiplayer.unity3d.com/netcode/current/basics/networkobject/) (such as the **Player**).
 
-You can also use the dedicated server package to set a player tag to server, client, or host. For more information, refer to ()[###LINK###].
+You can also use the dedicated server package to set a player tag to server, client, or host. For more information, refer to [Use Multiplayer Play Mode with a Dedicated Server](../dedicated-server/play-mode-dedicated-server.md).
 
 ## Set a player tag to server, client, or host in a script
 
-The following script uses the Netcode for GameObjects (NGO) [NetworkManager](https://docs-multiplayer.unity3d.com/netcode/current/components/networkmanager/) to automatically connect the Virtual Player as a server, client, or host based on their Player Tag. A Player with the `Server` Player Tag automatically runs as a server, and a Player with the `Client` Player Tag automatically runs as a client.
+The following script uses the Netcode for GameObjects [NetworkManager](https://docs-multiplayer.unity3d.com/netcode/current/components/networkmanager/) to automatically connect the Virtual Player as a server, client, or host based on their Player Tag. A Player with the `Server` Player Tag automatically runs as a server, and a Player with the `Client` Player Tag automatically runs as a client.
 
 :::important
-This example uses the `Contains` method which is case-sensitive by default. To make it case-insensitive, pass the `System.StringComparison.CurrentCultureIgnoreCase` method.
+This example uses the `Contains` method, which is case-sensitive by default. To make it case-insensitive, pass the `System.StringComparison.CurrentCultureIgnoreCase` method.
 :::
 
 :::note
-This example uses [Netcode for GameObjects (NGO)](https://docs-multiplayer.unity3d.com/netcode/current/about/).
+This example uses [Netcode for GameObjects](https://docs-multiplayer.unity3d.com/netcode/current/about/).
 :::
 
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