New release notes + review

Signed-off-by: Lorena Rangel <[email protected]>

Author: lorenrh

Diff for: desktop/release-notes.md

@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ For frequently asked questions about Docker Desktop releases, see [FAQs](faqs/ge
 ### New
 
 - Added support for new Wasm runtimes: slight, spin, and wasmtime.  Users can download Wasm runtimes on demand when the containerd image store is enabled.
-- Add Rust server support to Docker init.
+- Added Rust server support to Docker init.
 
 ### Upgrades
 - [Buildx v0.11.0](https://github.com/docker/buildx/releases/tag/v0.11.0)
@@ -49,28 +49,29 @@ For frequently asked questions about Docker Desktop releases, see [FAQs](faqs/ge
 
 #### For all platforms
 
-- Automatically pause Docker when idle and wake it up again on demand.
-- VirtioFS will be enabled by default in new installations of Docker Desktop on macOS 12.5 and higher.
-- Fix docker socket permissions. Fixes [docker/for-win#13447](https://github.com/docker/for-win/issues/13447) and [docker/for-mac#6823](https://github.com/docker/for-mac/issues/6823).
-- Fix Docker Desktop hanging on application quit when paused.
-- Fixed a bug where Logs and Terminal content are constantly covered by a fixed toolbar [docker/for-mac#6814](https://github.com/docker/for-mac/issues/6814).
-- Fixed a bug where input labels overlapped with input values on the container run dialog, affecting all platforms. Fixes [docker/for-win#13304](https://github.com/docker/for-win/issues/13304)
-- Fixed a bug where extension menu wasn't clickable. Fixes [docker/for-mac#6840](https://github.com/docker/for-mac/issues/6840) and [docker/for-mac#6855](https://github.com/docker/for-mac/issues/6855)
+- Docker Desktop now automatically pauses the Docker Engine when it is not in use and wakes up again on demand.
+- VirtioFS is now the default file sharing implementation for new installations of Docker Desktop on macOS 12.5 and higher.
+- Improved product usage reporting using OpenTelemetry (experimental).
+- Fixed Docker socket permissions. Fixes [docker/for-win#13447](https://github.com/docker/for-win/issues/13447) and [docker/for-mac#6823](https://github.com/docker/for-mac/issues/6823).
+- Fixed am issue which caused Docker Desktop to hang when quitting the application whilst paused.
+- Fixed a bug which caused the **Logs** and **Terminal** tab content in the **Container** view to be covered by a fixed toolbar [docker/for-mac#6814](https://github.com/docker/for-mac/issues/6814).
+- Fixed a bug which caused input labels to overlap with input values on the container run dialog. Fixes [docker/for-win#13304](https://github.com/docker/for-win/issues/13304).
+- Fixed a bug which meant users couldn't select the Docker Extension menu. Fixes [docker/for-mac#6840](https://github.com/docker/for-mac/issues/6840) and [docker/for-mac#6855](https://github.com/docker/for-mac/issues/6855)
 
 #### For Mac
 
-- Added a health check for macOS that will notify users if there has been a change on their system which might cause problems running Docker binaries.
+- Added a health check for macOS that notifies users if there has been a change on their system which might cause problems running Docker binaries.
 
 #### For Windows
 
-- Fixed a bug on WSL 2 where if Desktop is paused and then killed and then restarted, the startup will hang unless WSL is shutdown first with `wsl --shutdown`.
-- Fixes WSL engine in cases where wsl.exe is not on the PATH [docker/for-win#13547](https://github.com/docker/for-win/issues/13547).
-- Fixes the WSL engine's ability to detect cases where one of the Docker Desktop distro's drive is missing [docker/for-win#13554](https://github.com/docker/for-win/issues/13554).
-- Slow or unresponsive WSL integration should no longer prevent Docker Desktop from starting. Fixes [docker/for-win#13549](https://github.com/docker/for-win/issues/13549).
+- Fixed a bug on WSL 2 where if Desktop is paused, killed, and then restarted, the startup hangs unless WSL is shut down first with `wsl --shutdown`.
+- Fixed the WSL engine in cases where wsl.exe is not on the PATH [docker/for-win#13547](https://github.com/docker/for-win/issues/13547).
+- Fixed the WSL engine's ability to detect cases where one of the Docker Desktop distros' drive is missing [docker/for-win#13554](https://github.com/docker/for-win/issues/13554).
+- A slow or unresponsive WSL integration no longer prevents Docker Desktop from starting. Fixes [docker/for-win#13549](https://github.com/docker/for-win/issues/13549).
 - Added the following installer flags:
-  - `--hyper-v-default-data-root` specifies the default location for Hyper-V VM disk.
-  - `--windows-containers-default-data-root` specifies the default data root for Windows Containers.
-  - `--wsl-default-data-root` specifies the default location for WSL distro disks.
+  - `--hyper-v-default-data-root` which specifies the default location for Hyper-V VM disk.
+  - `--windows-containers-default-data-root` which specifies the default data root for Windows Containers.
+  - `--wsl-default-data-root` which specifies the default location for WSL distro disks.
 
 ## 4.20.1