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Author: shuangela

Diff for: source/connection-troubleshooting.txt

@@ -105,12 +105,12 @@ issues when attempting to connect to MongoDB.
    For more information about connection strings,
    see :ref:`Connection URI <golang-connection-uri>` in the Connection Guide.
 
-If your connection string contains a database username and database password, ensure that they
+If your connection string contains a username and password, ensure that they
 are in the correct format.
 
 .. note::
 
-   If the database username or database password includes any of the following characters, they
+   If the username or password includes any of the following characters, they
    must be `percent encoded <https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc3986#section-2.1>`__:
 
    .. code-block:: none