RR review

Author: lindseymoore

source/crud/query/retrieve.txt

@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ see the :ref:`node-fundamentals-query-document` guide.
 
    You can chain cursor methods to a find operation even when you pass an
    empty query. For example, the following code shows how you can
-   specify a projection while executing a find operation
+   specify a projection while performing a find operation
    that receives an empty query parameter:
 
    .. code-block:: javascript

source/crud/query/specify-documents-to-return.txt

@@ -49,9 +49,10 @@ that describe books into the ``myDB.books`` collection:
 
 .. note::
 
-   When you chain ``sort()``, ``limit()``, or ``skip()`` to a read operation, you must
-   specify all methods before iterating the cursor. If you specify a method after
-   iterating the cursor, the method you specified does not apply to the operation.
+   You must chain ``FindCursor`` methods such as ``sort()``, ``limit()``, or 
+   ``skip()`` to a read operation before iterating the cursor. If you specify 
+   a ``FindCursor`` method after iterating the cursor, the setting does not 
+   apply to the operation.
 
 .. include:: /includes/access-cursor-note.rst