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installing/installing_ibm_z/installing-ibm-z-lpar.adoc

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* See link:https://www.ibm.com/docs/en/systems-hardware/zsystems/3932-A02?topic=library-prsm-planning-guide[Processors Resource/Systems Manager Planning Guide] in {ibm-name} Documentation for PR/SM mode considerations.
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* link:https://www.ibm.com/docs/en/systems-hardware/zsystems/3932-A02?topic=library-prsm-planning-guide[Processors Resource/Systems Manager Planning Guide] in {ibm-name} Documentation for PR/SM mode considerations.
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* See link:https://www.ibm.com/docs/en/systems-hardware/zsystems/3932-A02?topic=library-dynamic-partition-manager-dpm-guide[IBM Dynamic Partition Manager (DPM) Guide] in {ibm-name} Documentation for DPM mode considerations.
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* link:https://www.ibm.com/docs/en/systems-hardware/zsystems/3932-A02?topic=library-dynamic-partition-manager-dpm-guide[IBM Dynamic Partition Manager (DPM) Guide] in {ibm-name} Documentation for DPM mode considerations.
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* See link:https://www.vm.ibm.com/library/presentations/lparperf.pdf[Topics in LPAR performance] for LPAR weight management and entitlements.
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* link:https://www.vm.ibm.com/library/presentations/lparperf.pdf[Topics in LPAR performance] for LPAR weight management and entitlements.
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* xref:../../scalability_and_performance/ibm-z-recommended-host-practices.adoc#ibm-z-recommended-host-practices[Recommended host practices for {ibm-z-name} & {ibm-linuxone-name} environments]
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* xref:../../installing/install_config/installing-customizing.adoc#installation-special-config-butane_installing-customizing[Creating machine configs with Butane]

installing/installing_ibm_z/installing-restricted-networks-ibm-z-lpar.adoc

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* xref:../../installing/install_config/installing-customizing.adoc#installation-special-config-butane_installing-customizing[Creating machine configs with Butane]

modules/minimum-ibm-z-system-requirements.adoc

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* {ibm-name} z16 (all models), {ibm-name} z15 (all models), {ibm-name} z14 (all models)
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* {ibm-linuxone-name} 4 (all models), {ibm-linuxone-name} III (all models), {ibm-linuxone-name} Emperor II, {ibm-linuxone-name} Rockhopper II
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[IMPORTANT]
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Running {product-title} on {ibm-z-name} in processor resource/system manager (PR/SM) mode without a hypervisor is strongly discouraged. Instead, use the Dynamic Partition Manager (DPM).
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When running {product-title} on {ibm-z-name} without a hypervisor use the Dynamic Partition Manager (DPM) to manage your machine.
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* FICON attached disk storage (DASDs). This can be dedicated DASDs that must be formatted as CDL, which is the default. To reach the minimum required DASD size for {op-system-first} installations, you need extended address volumes (EAV). If available, use HyperPAV to ensure optimal performance.
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* FICON attached disk storage (DASDs). These can be dedicated DASDs that must be formatted as CDL, which is the default. To reach the minimum required DASD size for {op-system-first} installations, you need extended address volumes (EAV). If available, use HyperPAV to ensure optimal performance.
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