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Co-authored-by: Adam Greig <[email protected]>

Author: jamesmunns

surveys/2024-08-survey.md

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 # Survey questions
 
-This is the first Rust Embedded Working Group community survey. The goal is to gather feedback from users of Rust on Bare Metal or RTOS based embedded devices including microcontrollers.
+This is the first Rust Embedded Working Group community survey. The goal is to gather feedback from users of Rust on bare-metal or RTOS based embedded devices including microcontrollers.
 
 ## Your use of embedded Rust
 
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 Type: select all that apply (optional)
 
 - Hobby or personal projects
-- School or University projects
+- School or university projects
 - Work or professional projects
 - Not currently using embedded Rust, but have in the past for projects
 - I have not used embedded Rust for any projects
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 - Zero devices (only internal or non-production usage)
 - 1 to 10 devices per year
 - 10 to 100 devices per year
-- 100 to 1000 devices per year
-- 1000 to 10000 devices per year
-- More than 10000 devices per year
+- 100 to 1,000 devices per year
+- 1,000 to 10,000 devices per year
+- More than 10,000 devices per year
 
 ### What architectures are you planning to use embedded Rust with in the next 12 months?