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@pg-ovh pg-ovh changed the title [VMware Hosted Private Cloud - NSX] - User access from OVH cloud console to NSX ressources [VMware Hosted Private Cloud - NSX] - Add user access to NSX-T console from OVH Manager Apr 29, 2024
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pg-ovh commented May 2, 2024 •
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Hello, je vous confirme que c'est bon pour moi. Vous pouvez merger cette PR @BrenKt @Y0Coss si les retours sont bon @franckcosta @Hugo1380 ?

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I saw "OVH" rather than "OVHcloud", I'm not entirely familiar with our guidelines on that. Is that good?

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J'ai vu "OVH" plutôt que "OVHcloud", je connais pas par-coeur nos guidelines là-dessus. C'est good ?

OVHcloud would be correct. :D

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pg-ovh commented May 2, 2024

J'ai fait les modifs merci @Hugo1380, @franckcosta @tcpdumpfbacke

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I added some comments :)

...sted_private_cloud/hosted_private_cloud_powered_by_vmware/nsx_add_user_rights/guide.fr-fr.md Outdated

- Avoir souscrit une offre [Hosted Private Cloud](https://www.ovhcloud.com/en/hosted-private-cloud/vmware/)
avec les options **"Network Security Virtualization"** ou **"Software-Defined Datacenter"**
- Se connecter à votre compte OVH (Si vous ne savez pas: suivez cette documentation : [Se connecter à votre compte OVH](https://help.ovhcloud.com/csm/en-account-log-in-ovhcloud-control-panel?id=kb_article_view&sysparm_article=KB0043032)</summary>
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  • "Si vous ne savez pas comment faire, suivez cette documentation:"

ça évite le double ":" dans la phrase.

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<summary>Comment accéder à votre organisation privée ?</summary>

1. Dans la console OVH Manager allez dans la section du bandeau central : `Hosted Private Cloud`
- <ins>Lien OVH</ins> : https://www.ovh.com/manager/#/dedicated/dedicated_cloud/PCC-XXX -> Remplacez le par le nom de vôtre organization privée.
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"organisation" avec un S.

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"Remplacez-le par le nom de votre service." serait plus adapté, on parle de service Hosted Private Cloud dans ce contexte généralement.

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5. Toujours depuis votre arborescence Hosted Private Cloud, Cliquez sur : `"VMware" -> XXX-XXX..`
- <ins>Lien OVH</ins> : https://www.ovh.com/manager/#/dedicated/dedicated_cloud/PCC-XXX -> Remplacez le par le nom de vôtre organization privée.
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Pareil ici: "organisation" avec un S.

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pareil: "service"

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Tous les titres sont en anglais dans la doc française.

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J'ai fait les modifs merci @Hugo1380, @franckcosta @tcpdumpfbacke

np, we can to this type of correction. Plz notify us when FR version is final and ready for review.

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FR review pending

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pg-ovh commented May 7, 2024

Ok pour la trad des boutons @YoannAtOVH, merci pour ces retours. Je ne ferai plus ces erreurs à l'avenir.

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title: "Activer NSX-T dans un Hosted Private Cloud VMware on OVHcloud"
excerpt: "Découvrez comment ajouter les droits à un utilisateur et aux Datacentres pour NSX-T"
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I added this tag as I'm not convinced images integration in the <details> format will work.
This will prevent the guide from being visible at first, letting us bandwidth to fix formats.

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